Poem a day challenge#1

Posted on April 5, 2011 by cutiejune

                                                                               Surf

                                                   Dive through the wave, WOOSH!

                                                            Ride the tide, SPLASH!

                                               Surf around with a board, WOOHOO!

                                                   And stay with the flow, WHEW!

                                                                 Speed it up, VOOM!

                                            And go with the roaring wave, ROAR!

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7 Responses to Poem a day challenge#1

  1. iluvpups1127 says:
    April 5, 2011 at 9:50 am

    i really like it because i can picture it… By your onomatopoeia … Really GOOD! I envy you!! i envy you so much!!!!! kkk

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  2. iluvpups1127 says:
    April 5, 2011 at 9:51 am

    i really like it because i can picture it… By your onomatopoeia … Really GOOD! I envy you so much!!!!! kkk

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  3. soccermpark says:
    April 5, 2011 at 11:33 am

    Wow! That’s so good!

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  4. Amanda says:
    April 5, 2011 at 1:44 pm

    Wow!!! so great. I like the word sounds
    or somthing. blah blah

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  5. iluvpups1127 says:
    April 6, 2011 at 8:02 am

    i really like it because i can picture it… By your onomatopoeia … Really GOOD! ❤ IT! 😉

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  6. iluvpups1127 says:
    April 6, 2011 at 8:03 am

    i really like it because i can picture it… By your onomatopoeia … Really GOOD! ❤
    😉

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  7. melody says:
    April 8, 2011 at 11:48 am

    In second grade we call those sound words, and I can hear the sounds! Good Job! -Ms. Welton

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